Dalenbourg's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Robot-Scorpion]

Reminds me of my digital stuff...

It appears to have the same problems that mine do as well...
The composition isn't interesting at all,
Some of the rocks in the background appear 2dimensional,
I cannot pinpoint the lightsource, as the shadows look like they were simply applied in the general area they would be.

You appear to have good ideas, I hope you can develop the technical skill to harbor them! Good luck, bro.

Dakuto responds:

ye your right... this is kinda.. the first piece is did with shadows and any sort of.. background.. and i know i have to improve a lot of things.

thanks for the review though.. :3

[Happy Walker]

Looks Incomplete.

Character design is neat (hueg eyes, wow).
Perspective makes no sense whatsoever.
Enviroment is devoid of details, really boring. Base colours are ok.

I'd suggest researching how to create perspective, and work on completing background. Good luck.

Artyluck responds:

It's not about background, I added it to kill emptiness, I think it's understandable cuz' back have no details at all, anyway... It was about my new coloring, clothes and proportions. :D

Thanks for your time and comments.

[Don't Drink the Water]

Artistically its awesome.

Technically, not so much.
The Right Arm is misplaced, or its been mutated from the water.
The eyes are misaligned.

Its great for a speedpaint though!
Moar!

zigan responds:

A friend of mine noted the eyes to me as well, but tbh I didn't even pay attention that much. It would make more sense if something was directly infront of her face, floating or something.

Not a score that I like but thanks for the input. =/

[Mavis]

My god, the colours...

You are very good at texturing, and a reasonable sense of shadowing.
Your anatomy must improve vastly though, as this is like pasting delicious icing on a gross cookie.

Tommy-Gun responds:

The anatomy looks fine to me. However, that doesn't mean it's perfect.

So, of course I'll keep practicing and take this into account.

[Possessed]

Good.

You are definitley improving!
Hands look great, proportions are improved.
The only thing I see wrong is that her dress and her hair are blowing in opposite directions, or that she has too much hairgel. The shoulders are a little uneven as well.
Good concept, but will the ghosts call the morning after?

Luxembourg responds:

Curses! While I was writing the little story-thingy to go with the picture, I was hoping it wouldn't be taken sexually. It sounds sexual, but it's possession! They take your soul; I couldn't think of a way to write about someone who enjoys possession without it sounding a little sexual.
Yes. The ghosts will call back.
I've been trying to do better with anatomy and proportions, but there are some little things like her shoulders and her left wrist, which is too thin.
And as for the dress, I have no excuse. That was a massive mistake in the composition that I didn't even really think about until it was almost finished and too late to fix it.
Thanks for the review.

[december duel]

Rockin awesome

Only criticism I have is the ambiguous shadow beneath the girl and the noodely left shoulder for the monster. Looks great otherwise... Its good to see your art here.

lenkalamari responds:

thanks. yeah i was a little unsure about the shadow so i just went for a generic one

[The hoode girl]

Looks great!

I really like it, I wouldnt mind seeing whole scenes from you...

The only problem I see is the zipper's teeth being too big for the zip, but it doesnt really matter at all, I'm just nitpicking.

ZoMBieFRogTeacher responds:

thanks matey ! ya your right whit the zip teeth thing